ISHQ (Meri Pehli Nasri Koshish)

[Virdan]

Asslam o Alaikum All Friends,
Yeh meri pehli nassri koshish hay. aap log isya parh kar apni raaiy say agah keejiyay ga. weay meray khayalat b aisay he hain jo mien nay likha ahy bus farq yeh hay k mein nay nassar ki sorat apnay jazbat paisha kiyay hain. aap k comments ka muntazir. M. Amir Virdan

[! Aatish !]

Virdan Bahi ye waqai ap ne lekha hai ?
wonderfull


keep it up Bhai its really good one

[Virdan]

Thanks 4 ur kind comments bro
yes its my personal

[Zymal]

bhuat he acha likha hai aap nai ~~AV~~
UB rukna nahi hai likhtay rehna hai

[Virdan]

Thanks 4 ur kind words
ok i will try Insha Allah

[Khushboo]

V bhai...Wah keya likha hai aapne..u truly amaze me with ur capability MashAllah !

As you know mujhe zara mushkil hoti hai urdu parne meiN..but aapne tho
itna ahsaaN likha hai sab ke ek do words na bi parne se..mujhe samajh ageya jo aap ne likha hai.

Mohabbat ko aapne ek bahut hi ache aur paak zareeyeh se peysh kia hai..mohabaat tho vo aah hai jo khud lagae nahiN jaati aur ...bhujaani bi mushkil hojaati hai.

Piyar meiN log aandhe hojaate heiN..oone kisi cheez ki fikar nahiN rehti..apne hi dhun meiN magan rehte heiN aur apne mehboob ke naam ki maala japte rehte heiN. Yeh ek ajeeb sa ehsaas hai ho har koi apne tareeqe se masoos karta hai.

Yeh bi sach hai ke sometimes we dun have the words or sometimes dun think we have the "right" words to express our love as we think so highly of that person ..that no matter which word we use..we believe it will not to do justice to our feelings and emotions and declaration of our love.

Jese ke aapne kaha ...sab kashthiaN log jala kar nikal parte heiN..junoon sar par..dil meiN ek hulchul and jazbaat had se bahir hote heiN. Jab hum kisi cheez ko haasil karna chahhte heiN tho kisi bi cheez ki parwa nahiN karte aur apni saari energy oos meiN dhaal dete heiN.

Aakhir " Yeh Ishq NahiN AhsaaN Bas Itna Samajh Lijiyeh Ek Aag Ka Dariya Hai Aur Dhoob Ke Jaana Paar" koi choti si baat nahiN hai..yeh dariya insaan ko dhoobo bi deta hai aur pohncha bi deta hai. Himmat honi chahyeh

**i'll come back to finish this off later** i have to go...!

[Virdan]

mein aap ki wapsi aur mazeed comments ka intizar karo ga aur phir apnay comments do ga so i will be back too Insha Allah