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Old 07-21-2005, 02:15 PM
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(Nufrat ki vadi)
juNmooN sey juNg jari hay
Nafrat ki as vadi meiN
paNi sey piyas bujti NahiN
muN ko taskeeN meiLti NahiN
khoN ki asi piyas Lagi
juNmoN sey jo mit Na saki
khoN baha ak iNsaN ka
aur ak iNsaN ko khoshi hoyi
khoN ki hoLi kheLi gayi
juNmoN sey Log murtey gaye
NasLoN tak ye juNg jari rahi
Log marey aur mertey gaye
apni shaN barHaNey keLiye
masoom hatooN meiN
Hatyar tahma diye
aur badLey ki agg aysi jaLi
kayi NasleiN as meiN juLas gayiN
koyi to ye siLsiLa baNd karey
badLey key bajaye koyi to maf ker dey
mager shayid,
asa mumkiN NahiN
maf kerNey meiN in ki shaN ghat,ti hay
aur khoN bahaNey meiN iN ki shaN berti hay
ye khoN ki Nadi hay
jo juNmoN sey bhe rahi hay
Naheed, to kitNi pagaL hay
jo Nufrat ki vadi meiN
piyar aur dosti key
phooL khiLaNa chati hay
teri bateiN suN ker
tujey buzdiL kahiN gey sub hi
kiyokey
kabiLey ki shaN barhaNey keLiye
khoN bahaNa perta hay
aur to,
iNsaNiyat sey piyar kerti hay
mager to kiyo bhoL rahi hay
Nafrat ki vadi meiN
khabi piyar key phooL nahiN
khiL saktey,
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very nice naheed
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Kaya baaat hay Nahee aap ki very nice great
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bohat acchy hai
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Excellent Naheed
App ki qalam bohat acchay zouq ki hamil hay. Is ka izhar jari rakhiay ga. Kalam ki zuban sach bolti hay.
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Superb indeed Naheed
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very nice naheed
Mod ji thanx 4 ur appreciation
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Kaya baaat hay Nahee aap ki very nice great
hamari adna si kavish app ko pasand ayi bohot shokriya
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bohat acchy hai
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Excellent Naheed
App ki qalam bohat acchay zouq ki hamil hay. Is ka izhar jari rakhiay ga. Kalam ki zuban sach bolti hay.
mod ji bohot shokriya app ney meri poetry ki gherayi ko mehsos kiya ji app ney sahi kaha kalam ki zuban sach bolti hay asi liye to hum jo feel kertey hein asee likh detey hein aur yaha app sub sey sheir ker letey hein
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Superb indeed Naheed
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Kaya baaat hay Nahee aap ki very nice great
hamari adna si kavish app ko pasand ayi bohot shokriya
yeh adna thi hamien pata he nahee chala hamien to apni cheezein adna lag rahi thi is k muqabilya mein really a nice one
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beautiful poems
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WELCOME AISHA BALOCH at Chat DD Forum
Hope u will enjoy here Insha Allah
So Keep coming and have fun here
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very very nice
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