Mujhay Koi Gila Na Tha

[Virdan]

Aap sab say isi liyay share ker raha hon ta k mujay apni taseeh ka moqa mila so apni raaiy say nawaziyay. Thanks

[MJKT]

wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
yeh tu meri story haie

[shiny_ooze]

ap bohat acha likhte hain virdan bohat achi poetry hai

thanks for sharing

[Virdan]

Originally Posted by mjkt

wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
yeh tu meri story haie

Mujay yeh sun ker achha laga kyon k likhnay walay ko aisa he likhna chahyay k her ik ko woh apnay dil ki he awaz lagay. Thanks 4 ur reply brother

[Virdan]

Originally Posted by shiny_ooze

ap bohat acha likhte hain virdan bohat achi poetry hai

thanks for sharing

yeh aap ki aali zarfi hay jo meri poetry ko acha keh rahi hain. mein to bus time pass ker raha hon ro dho k. Still Thanks 4 ur kind comments & Welcome too.

[Virdan]

Sorry 4 double Image,
Remove ker diya gaya hay

[Khushboo]

Wah bahut khoob V bhai..your really have a gud taste in poetry..dio ko choo jaane waale words share kardiyeh heiN aapne

[Virdan]

Bus sis apni haad tak to pori koshish kerta hon k sahe likha jaiy but tifl e maktab aisa he kuch likh sakta hay na k jis men bohat sari mistakes hon gi

Still Thanks a lot 4 ur kind words
aap k words hausla bakhshtay hain

[Khushboo]

Bhai you have to publish your work..bahut hunar chupaaya hua hai aapne

[Zymal]

bhuat he umda hai

[Virdan]

Thanks Zymal 4 ur words

[AaiNa]

nice work geee,,,,,,,,,,

[Virdan]

Thanks Aaina 4 ur very kind words

[Larki Anjani]

VIRDAN AAP ACHE POET HAIN U SHOULD WRITE A BOOK

[Virdan]

Thanks a lot 4 ur very very kind words LA
mein pata nahe kesa hon. but i think abhi is qabil nahe hon kyon k bohat mistakes hain abhi to

Bus coments deti rehyay ga plz
wait rahay ga