kabhi tumhara udas dil

[MJKT]

kabu tumhara udas dil ho qyas krna ka pas main hoon...
kbi ksi ki kmi lagayto qyas krna ka pas main hoon...
tumhara apny jo paas bethay
tumhari nazrein utartay hein
jo tum na unko paao qarib qyas krna ka pas mein hoon...
kbi jo tanhai mein ksi ki sadaaein tum ko sunai dy to chupkay se band
ankhoon sa qyas krna k pas mein hoon...
ya mera wada bhe yaad rkhna ka main na tum ko bhula sakon ga
jo tum bhe mujh kobhula na pao qyas krna ka pas mein hon....

[Zymal]

very nice kafi tuochy hai

[Virdan]

bohat pyara likha hay bro
such mien wording bohat achhi hay
bus isay thora sa adjust karein sheron ki sorat mien
bohat he pyaray alfaaz hain. likhtay rehyay aur hum say share kertay rehyay

[Cynosure]

Yeh Apki hay mjkt.
R u sure?
i think isay famous poet's poetry main hona chahiay tha.

[MJKT]

Originally Posted by Cynosure

Yeh Apki hay mjkt.
R u sure?
i think isay famous poet's poetry main hona chahiay tha.

agar app koo lagta haie kaa is koo famous poet poetry mein hona chaye
tu mein udhar is ko post kar deta hoon magar mujhe proof karnaa ki zarorat nahe!

[Virdan]

MJKT agar yeh aap ki nahe hay to phir isay waqai Famous Poetry mien hona chahyay as Cynosure said

Reply plz

[MJKT]

some 1 sms me

[Farhan Ansari]

achchi hey,
thori adjust kerlen, ager aap ki nahi to famous poets mein move kerdein.
anyhow nice sharing

[Virdan]

very nice sharing bro but yahan "Own Personal Poetry" mein sirf aap apni poetry share ker saktay hain ya kisi relivant person ki personal poetry.

Yeh kisi aur poet ki hay so Famous Poets Poetry mien Move ki ja rahi hay. Thanks

[Red Rose]

gud poetry . maza aya .

thanx 4 sharin.

RR

[MJKT]

thanks every one

[shiny_ooze]

Originally Posted by mjkt

kabu tumhara udas dil ho qyas krna ka pas main hoon...
kbi ksi ki kmi lagayto qyas krna ka pas main hoon...
tumhara apny jo paas bethay
tumhari nazrein utartay hein
jo tum na unko paao qarib qyas krna ka pas mein hoon...
kbi jo tanhai mein ksi ki sadaaein tum ko sunai dy to chupkay se band
ankhoon sa qyas krna k pas mein hoon...
ya mera wada bhe yaad rkhna ka main na tum ko bhula sakon ga
jo tum bhe mujh kobhula na pao qyas krna ka pas mein hon....

very nice
keep it up