Ishq Ya Hawas?????

[Virdan]

STORY.

RULES: PARNE WALE PER LAZIM HAI KE WO IS STORY KO POORA PERHE WARNA NA PARHE

INTRODUCTION: IN THIS STORY WE HAVE THREE MAIN CHARACTERS

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Fahid (LARKI KA MANGETAR)
NAUSHEEN (LARKE KI MANGETAR)
BILAL (ASHIQ YA DEEWANA)
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STORY IS VERY LENGTHY, BUT I WANT TO DISCUSS SOME MAIN POINTS.

Is story me Fahid aur nausheen aapas me cousin hain her chhoti chhoti baat per larte hain aur thori der hi main ghul mil jatey hain bachpan hi se dono me gehri dosti hoti hai. Fahid nausheen ko office jate hue aur wapsi per collage drop aur pick kerta hai, when they both become young phir un ke gher wale un ki mangni ker dete hain. ab zara dono me nazakat peda ho jati hai Fahid to os se mazak ker leta tha lekin wo sharma ker apni nazrien jhuka leti aur Fahid os ki is ada ka to dewana sa ban gaya tha. ab dono me larai nahin hoti only love.


aik dafa nausheen collage ke bahir sarak ke pass Fahid ka intezar ker rahi thi ke aik doosra aadmi (bilal) ki car signal per rukti hai or wo nausheen ki aankhon ko dekhta reh jata hai jabke nausheen scarf me hoti hai wo phool le ker kisi bache ke haath os anjan larki ko daita hai lekin nausheen phool wapis bache ko de deti hai

wo nausheen ko bina dekhe bohot passand kerta hai apni ammi ko os ke gher perposal le ker bahjta hai lekin perposal reject hojata hai pher wo aadhi raat ko nausheen ko phone kerta hai or wajah pochta hai nausheen kehti hai ke meri mangni ho chuki hai

bilal nausheen ko kidnap kerwata hai naushen ke gher wale pareshan hote hain nausheen ko jab hoosh aata hai wo anjan gher me bilal ko daikh ker ghabrati hai wo os ke kareeb aata hai wo dur ho jati hai pher wo kehta hai well came home wo kehti hai kyun laye ho yahn app ko kya mile ga nausheen kehti hai app muje choo nahi sakte wo romentic andaz me kahta hai aachi lag rahi ho or choona hi hota to wo pahle ker lata pher wo nausheen se zabardasti shadi ker laita hai yeh keh ker ke (tumhari ammi aur mangetar mere pas hain agar tum ne meri kisi baat se inkar kya to me on dono ko khatam ker doon ga) shadi ke baad wo room me aata hai aur apni man mani kerta hai nausheen bohot roti hai lekin.. subah ko nausheen apne gher jane ko kehti hai lekin wo yeh kehta hai meri ammi aa rahi hain me ne on ko sub such bata diya hai ke me ne tum se zabardasti shadi ki hai phir bilal ki ammi apni bahoo se milti hain aur kehti hain ke mujhe pata hai jis tarah bilal ne tum se shadi ke hai bohat ghalat kya lekin wo dil ka bura nahin thora ziddi hai nausheen ka attitude bilal ki ammi ke saath normal tha.

is tarah ek mahina guzar gaya jab shaam ko bilal gher per aaya to os ke haath aur sar per bandage bandhe hue they nausheen dekh ker ghabra gaye aur os ne bilal se poocha ke kya hua to os ne kaha ke minor sa accident ho gaya tha, subah ko jab bilal apne room se wapis nahin nikla to nausheen ghabrai aur wo khud os ke room me gaye aur dekha ke bilal neend me batein ker raha hai aur keh raha hai ke main aaj hi tumhe aazad ker doon ga jab nausheen ne bilal ke sar per haath rakha to wo bilkool dar gaye kyon ke os ka sar kafi garam tha os ne ammi ko aawaz di phir doctor ko call kya.

nausheen saara din bilal ke pas bethi rahi aur jab bilal ko hosh aaya to os ne kaha ke ab mujhe kahin nahin jana me aap ko chor ker kahin nahin jaon gi bus aap jaldi se theek ho jaiye.

kuch time ke baad jab bilal theek ho gaya to nausheen ko kehta hai baher jana hai ready ho jao wo gaari le ke nausheen ke gher ke pass rookta hai or kehta hai jao tum ko jana tha na.

wo bilal ko le ker ander jati hai os ko dekh ker gher wale bohot khush hote hain os ka mangetar os ko kehta hai ke yahi hai na wo aadmi jis ne tumhein kidnap kya tha, nausheen: haan lekin ab yeh mere husband hain aur tum bhi koi achi larki se shadi ker lo.

DOSTON YEH TO THI STORY LEKIN AB MUJHE AAP LOG YEH BATAIYE KE JO HUA ACHA HUA YA NAHIN? MEANS,

BILAL KA KIDNAP KERNA AUR APNI MAN MANI KERNA KYUN KE WO AGAR NAUSHEEN KO KIDNAP NAHIN KERTA TO FAHID AUR NAUSHEEN APNI MOHABBAT KO ANJAAM TAK POHNCHATE.

TO AAP LOG IS KO KYA KAHIEN GE BILAL KI AASHQI, DEEWANAPAN YA HAWAS?

Edited by: Moderator

[pari]

bilal ka pyar ka izhar galat tha us ko asa nai karna chahiya tha but jo hona tha wo ho giya its love not hawas

[Master Blaster]

Very Nice Story Virdan Bhai, I think that Pari is exectally right.

[Naheed Baloch]

nice story
mein to ye samagti hoo ki bilal ka piyar hawas to nahi tha ........mager mein asee piyar bhi nahi kaho gi ..kiyoke jiss sey piyar kiya jata hay .....ass ki azat ki jati hay .....bilal ney jo kiya galat kiya ..ass tara man mani ker key ass ney noshen ko to hasil ker liya ..mager piyar hasil na ker sake ga kiyoke noshen ney ass key7 rahney ka jo fasla kiya hay ......wo sirf samjota hay magbori hay .....piyar to bilkul bhi nahi hay ......aur bilal ney noshen ko jiss tara hasil kiya hay .......ass tara sey zid aur jhoti ana ki taskeen to hoti hay mager ass tara piyar nahi milta .......bilal ney jo kiya wo piyar nahi hay ......asee zid aur ana parasti khana chayee.......

[The Chief]

Bilal Ne jo kiya woh pyar hargaz nahee hay bal keh zid aur hawas he hai hawas isi cheez ka he name hay keh aap kisi ki cheez ko zabardasti apnay istimaal mien le aao aur sur ki khawhish aur ratt rakho chahay ik baar ya baar so yeh pyar nahee hayJhooti Anna Hay HAt Dharmi hay. Shame on him it is not the mental approch of a lover.

[mehakta aanchal]

isay main hargiz piyar ka naam nahin doongi..piyar to woh jazba hai jo humain kisi doosray ki izzzat karna seekhata hai..piyar main qurbani mangi nahin di jati hai....
jo kuch bilal ne kiya..woh sirf uski zid thi...dat was neither lov, nor hawas.

[sapna]

jinab story zaberdest hai hai or gd point k bilal nay jo khuch kiya wo right tha ya rong tu jinab mein tu bilal ko rong kahoon gee cz 1st tu love insan ko qurbani dena sekhata hai na k iss terhan agley ki zindagi hi berbad ker di jaey cz hum jis say love kertey hein always uss ko khush dhekhna chahtey hein chahey hum kitney hi dhukhi kuon na hon hum uss k liya jan da sektey hein bt uss ki jan nahein janey detey or jub k app ko pata ho k ap jis say love ker rahey ho wo kisi or say love kerta hai tu app ko khud sabeer ker lena chahiya na k ana ka masla bana k zaberdasti ki jaey or if app jis sey love kertey ho or wo kisi ko like na kerta ho tu app uss ko agree zaroor kersektey ho k wo app k love ko samagh ker app ko apna ley other wise app uss say zaberdesti na kero bilal ney jo khuch kiya wo rong tha ..........

[Virdan]

Thanks a lot Pari, Naheed, Anchal, Moderator, Sapna And Master Jee, I m really thankful to u all for this contribution and i think that u all will do some thing 4 this forum.

[Mani]

hi
story buht hi achi hay
haan bilal nay acha nahi kya yah sab liken bilal ko bhi uskay karmoon ki saza milhi gia woo is kay ishq main itna deewana tha kay us ko us nay hasil hi kar lya us nay apni zidd ko manwaliya
bharhal is story main bilal ki kafi ghalti thi kyun mohabbat kisi ko kidnap kar kay ussay shadi kar kay nahi hoti bilkul insan ki apni feeling hoti hain ik dosaray kay lya hmmmm
im mani the grt

[Virdan]

Hmm thanks 4 Remarks Sweet Sis

[dasht-e-tanhai]

zorri nai hai k ap jis se peyar karo or vo ap ko mil jae, or bilal sahib ko esa nahin karna chaiye tha.
or mai aanchal ki bat se agree karta ho k peyar waqia hi qurbani ka name hai. or dosri bat k peyar mai koi zid B nai kaam karti so mai B is ko peyar nai kehta.
sorry bilal.

[Virdan]

sorry kehnay ki zaroorat he nahee hay jo sach ha so sach hay bus

[Great Planner]

so nice story .. amir saib baat yeh hai k ,jehan tak bilal ka taluk hai to yeh us ney seraser ghalet kiya kiounk muhabbet hasil ki jati hai cheeni nahin jati ,aur pyar to qurbani daina sikhata hai na k apni zid k liye kisi ko tang ya ruswa kerna ..
laiken nousheen ney jo faisla kiya its very great ,yehi muhabbet hai ,,,,,,,,,,,,,

[Virdan]

waisay mairay Nazdeek Nausheen ka faisla muhabbat nahee masalihat tha waqt ke sath apnay halaat ke sath

[Wasi Gujar]

amir bhai yeh to aap tabh kehain k agher jebh bilal ko chot lagi aur jabh woh bemar hoya to kia nosheen sey us ka derd mahsoos nahin kiy a.. aur bilal ney jebh us ko janey ki ijazet di to woh ja bhi sekti thi wapis apni duniya main .. ...........