Bait Baazi

Bait Baazi · 12-13-2008, 05:23 PM

salam dear sweet memberz karna yeh hai k mein aik sher likhonghi aur woh sher jis lafz pe khatm hugha aapko ussi lafz se aik dosra sher likhna hughaa lakin sher 2 ya 4 lines se zyada lambha nahi hona hona chahyee soo chale mein start karti hun

hum nend ke shoqin zyada tu nahi hain
kuch khuwab na dekhein tu ghuzara nahi hota

H

Khushboo · #2 12-13-2008, 06:00 PM

ham ke Thahare ajanabii itane madaaraato.n ke baad
phir bane.nge aashnaa kitanii mulaaqaato.n ke baad

kab nazar me.n aayegii bedaaG sabze kii bahaar
Khuun ke dhabbe dhule.nge kitanii barasaato.n ke baad

"B"

Larki Anjani · #3 12-13-2008, 06:08 PM

barish thi hum the aur ghani hurhi thi sham
tumne liya tha kanpte hontoon se mera naam

n

jin_bhoot_online · #4 12-13-2008, 06:34 PM

Narm lehjy se mar dety hain...
Log asy bhi piyar dety hain....
Waqt ,akhsoos dosroon k liye....
Or humein sirf intizar dety hain...

""H""

Larki Anjani · #5 12-14-2008, 09:05 AM

has has k sunati hai jahan bhar ke fasane
poocho tere bare mein tu ro deti hai barish

b

Blossom · #6 12-14-2008, 10:34 PM

baazicha-e-atfal hai duniya mere aage
hota hai shaboroz tamasha mere aage

hota hai nihaan gard mein sharaa mere hote
ghisata hai jabin khaak pe dariya mere aage

G

Larki Anjani · #7 12-15-2008, 04:00 PM

gham e zindagi ne lakar humein us taraf hai mara
jaha us taraf kinara na hai is taraf kinara

k

Blossom · #8 12-17-2008, 10:19 AM

kahen panghaton ki dager nahe kahen aanchalon ka nager nahe
yah pahar dhoop ke perahan,koi saya dar shajer nahe
koi bikka ha kitnay karoor main zara is ka haal bataey
koi shaks bhook say mer gaya,yah khaber to koi khaber nahe

Khushboo · #9 12-17-2008, 12:46 PM

na shikaayate.n na gilaa kare
ko_ii aisaa shaKhs huaa kare
jo mere liye hii sajaa kare
mujh hii se baate.n kiyaa kare

"K"

Blossom · #10 12-17-2008, 03:42 PM

v nice khushboo khwaish kerny may kai herj ha

kitnay nadan han tere bhoolny waly ktujay
yad kernay k liya umer pari ho jesay

J

***Virdan*** · #11 12-17-2008, 04:44 PM

Jab koi Zakham bhara Dagh bana
Jab koi bhool gaya yaad aaya

A

jin_bhoot_online · #12 12-17-2008, 05:24 PM

Aankhon main raha dil mai utar kar nahi dekha
kashti k musafir ne samandar nahi dekha
pather mujhe kahta hai mera chahny wala
mai moom hon us ne mujhe choo kar nahi dekha

""D""

Blossom · #13 12-17-2008, 06:10 PM

dil ise zaher ki lazat say salamat ha Adem
hum haseeno ki jafaoun ko dua dayty hain

H

***Virdan*** · #14 12-18-2008, 07:45 PM

Hum na hotay to kisi aur k cherchay hotay
Khalqat-e-Shehar to kehnay ko fassanay mangay

M...

Blossom · #15 12-18-2008, 08:14 PM

mout ki aakhri hichki ko zara ghor se sun
sari hasti ka khulasa is awaz mai hai

H

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Bait Baazi Larki Anjani *Diamond Member* Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Paris Posts: 14,858 Thanks: 3,588 Thanked 2,966 Times in 1,671 Posts Larki Anjani 12-13-2008, 05:23 PM Rating: (0 votes - average) salam dear sweet memberz karna yeh hai k mein aik sher likhonghi aur woh sher jis lafz pe khatm hugha aapko ussi lafz se aik dosra sher likhna hughaa lakin sher 2 ya 4 lines se zyada lambha nahi hona hona chahyee soo chale mein start karti hun hum nend ke shoqin zyada tu nahi hain kuch khuwab na dekhein tu ghuzara nahi hota H __________________ *sehraye yaad mein bhatak gai hun* dhondte khud ko thaq gai hun
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