Bait Baazi

Bait Baazi · 12-13-2008, 10:23 PM

salam dear sweet memberz karna yeh hai k mein aik sher likhonghi aur woh sher jis lafz pe khatm hugha aapko ussi lafz se aik dosra sher likhna hughaa lakin sher 2 ya 4 lines se zyada lambha nahi hona hona chahyee soo chale mein start karti hun

hum nend ke shoqin zyada tu nahi hain
kuch khuwab na dekhein tu ghuzara nahi hota

H

~Zymal~ · #**196** 04-08-2009, 10:53 PM

Itna Toota Hoon Key Chooney Sey Bikhar Jaoon Gey,
Ab Aghar Aur Dua Do Ge To Mar Jaoon Gey,
Pooch Kar Mera Pata Waqt Raye Gaan Na Karo,
Main To Banjara Hoon Kiya Janey Kidhar Jaoon Gey,
Phool Reh Jayen Gey Fakkat Guldanoon Ke Nazar,
Main To Khushboo Hoon Hawaon Main Bikhar Jaon Gey,

Gul R Huma · #**197** 04-10-2009, 02:30 PM

Yeh Aur baat K ab Khoon Khoon haiN har lamha
JInn AankhouN mein Khawab Thay GulabouN se

YEY next ..!

Muskaan · #**198** 04-10-2009, 05:30 PM

ye na thi hamari qismat k wisaal e yaar hota
ager aur jeete rehte tu yehi intazar hota
kahoon kis se mein k kya he, shab e gham buri bala he
mujhe kya bura tha marna, agar aik baar hota!!!

next ALIF!

R oC k iN · #**199** 04-11-2009, 12:01 AM

UsS SHAKHS K TUM SE BHI MARASAM HEIN TU HOUN GAY
WO JHOOT NA BOLAY GA MERE SAMNE AA KAR

RE.......Next

Khushboo · #**200** 04-11-2009, 05:16 AM

rokataa hai Gam-e-izhaar se pindaar mujhe
mere ashko.n se chhupaa le mere ruKhsaar mujhe

"Ye"

Z@R@ · #**201** 04-12-2009, 02:49 PM

YOUN NA DEKHO TASVEER BAN K
HANS DO MARI TAQDEER BAN K

'K'

Khushboo · #**202** 04-18-2009, 05:08 AM

Khulii jo aa.Nkh to vo thaa na vo zamaanaa thaa
dahakatii aag thii tanhaa_ii thii fasaanaa thaa

Gamo.n ne baa.NT liyaa mujhe yuu.N aapas me.n
ke jaise mai.n ko_ii luuTaa huaa Khazaanaa thaa

"alif"

~Zymal~ · #**203** 06-12-2009, 09:24 PM

aankhon ko intizaar ka de kar humar chala gaya
chaha tha aik shakhs ko janay kidher chala gaya

din ki wo mehfilain gayee, raatoon ke ratjagay gaye
koyee samet kar mere shaam-o-seher chala gaya

Blossom · #**204** 06-12-2009, 10:34 PM

Aankhon Ki Zuban Woh Samajh Nahin Patay
Hoont Magar Kuch Keh Nahin Patay

ye

Khushboo · #**205** 06-17-2009, 01:34 PM

ye aur baat terii galii me.n na aaye.n ham
lekin ye kyaa ki shahar teraa chho.D jaaye.n ham

muddat hu_ii hai kuu-e-butaa.N kii taraf gaye
aavaaragii se dil ko kahaa.N tak bachaaye.n ham

"Meem"

Roomi · #**206** 06-19-2009, 02:15 AM

Mujhe kiya pata tha kabhi ishaq mein
Raqeebon ko qased banate nhi

I

Khushboo · #**207** 06-22-2009, 09:07 PM

is me.n ko_ii shikavaa na shikaayat na gilaa hai
ye bhii ko_ii Khat hai ki mohabbat se bharaa hai

mujh ko merii aavaaz sunaa_ii nahii.n detii
kaisaa ye mere jism me.n ik shor machaa hai

"Yeh"

Jassiey · #**208** 07-21-2009, 07:28 AM

YooN hi tou shaakh say pat-tay gira nahi karatiy
bachurr k log zeada jia nahi kertay
jou anay walay hain mousam inahin shumaar main rakh
jou din guzer gaey un ko gina nahi kertay

poet..Mohsan Bhopali

zuhaib · #**209** 07-21-2009, 09:59 AM

Youn he be-sabab na Phira karoo, Koi shaam gher bhi raha karo
Wo gazal ki sachi kitaab ha, usy chupky chupky parha karoo

Jassiey · #**210** 07-21-2009, 10:27 AM

ohh mari ankhon ki thandak tere hi noor se hai
tujhe dekhne ko mari andkhe taras ke ab murjahne ko hain

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Bait Baazi Larki Anjani *Diamond Member* Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Paris Posts: 14,729 Thanks: 3,482 Thanked 2,895 Times in 1,639 Posts Larki Anjani 12-13-2008, 10:23 PM Rating: (0 votes - average) salam dear sweet memberz karna yeh hai k mein aik sher likhonghi aur woh sher jis lafz pe khatm hugha aapko ussi lafz se aik dosra sher likhna hughaa lakin sher 2 ya 4 lines se zyada lambha nahi hona hona chahyee soo chale mein start karti hun hum nend ke shoqin zyada tu nahi hain kuch khuwab na dekhein tu ghuzara nahi hota H __________________ *Ghalat Nahin zamane main Lajawaab hain Hum!* Samaj sake na koi.... wo kitaab hain Hum!!!
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